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A Strenuous Recollection (Free verse) by Doug

Between longest hour (and sand quick day), torpor sets in the tongue. And this quickening lassitude- dries even up the wettest lust to an unkempt,unchaste crust, of lapse and indifference- of long past passion(behind a hope), of original lick of flat,tan stomachs. Intrigue lose in a ran-out inkwell, dim blots of flushed eruptions. The first fondle of new,moist,electric swell- has turned to a strenuous recollection.

==Doylum 11-Sep-04/5:38 PM
And at least I know how to punctuate after a comma.

thats skill to the nth degree.

you should of course add that

My dads a fireman so there what does your dad do? he i bet he's a binman or a college lecturer or somting. And i bet you like spam sandwitches as well and Jason Donovan. So there!

Nice to see everyone is still entirely gay here on poemranker. and that zodiac appears to be the most gayestist of all.

Yeah?




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