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Dare (Free verse) by LintyWeenis

The lights screaming by tonight is our night. My foot to the floor you're screaming my name. Like so many times before Let's see if we make it this time.

Dovina 9-Sep-04/3:02 PM
Saying that it's open to interpretation is saying the obvious, whether you explain or not. To simply say you're not going to explain is to send me away wondering, unless you think it's so obvious I should know your meaning. Seems to me it needs a lot of help in grammar and clarity.




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