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Who'd suspect? (Acrostic) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Live tonight and come with me out on the town is where we'll be no one will say girl where have you been? On the hill we'll ride down into valleys and riversides, just me and you evening air rushing fast red lights left somewhere flashing behind our backs Driving out of view, so that I can be alone with you under this maple tree the grass lined with due eventually I'm sure they'll find what remains

Dovina 8-Sep-04/10:21 AM
That's the ultimate in dimness, a colossal blob of balogne blubber! I'm learning. Ain't it great.




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