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ReplyTo a comment on a night of solitude by Faulk.
Dovina4 Sep 2004 Quite nice. I'd leave out "heavenly" on line 3, and "lost" in line 5. Line 6: "As the breeze stirs . . . Omit "The totality of" A beautiful scene.
Dovina4 Sep 2004