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~YOUR TURN~ (Free verse) by Brandy_n_Cali

Shut Up Don't Talk Just Listen My turn to talk Your turn to listen Your turn to cry What? Why? Who am I? Who the hell are you? I won't, I can't just forget What the hell were you thinking? What was I thinking? I gave you too many chances You gave me too many excuses I have cried too much You have hurt me more than once I ignored the truth You broke your promises Time and time again Over and over All the same lies Same sad stories Your selfish decisions Your greedy ways I will not be cheated on anymore How can you say you love me? You don't know what love is! I will not be hurt again Not by you It's YOUR TURN What we had is gone It's Over Over for Good There is not a thing you can say Nothing you can do And as For ME, No More Crying Days

Brandy_n_Cali 1-Sep-04/6:02 PM
I think that when people comment on someone else's poems that they should explain what they are saying if it is comment that u dont normally hear or frase hardly used.
FOR EXAMPLE-Coments such as
"meh."
&
"Are you really 22 years old? Lord jesu's benevolent ball sack"
&
"A tic turd on high wip"
&
"A little too much piss or not enough vinegar, naybe some vodka would help"




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