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abortion (Free verse) by darylchew

kill me break my bones. suck me in they shall revel in my bloody demise bathe in my blood feast on my meat forgotten, i will be only to be remembered, in nightmares and sweaty bedsheets (for your conscience haunts) what were you thinking, on that day that created me? a moment of blunder, impatience screw you. body flung through windshield. rest in peace; i will for, my death is avenged.

nentwined 30-Aug-04/12:52 PM
awfully preachy. over-described.




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