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along the alley (Free verse) by BigB

What was he living for? A dark alley right ahead He made for it Blade shimmering in his unsteady hands. He stumbled. Jealousy, pain ,trauma. Stopped. Pondered. Contemplated. And he took a turn to the brightly-lit thoroughfare.

darylchew 30-Aug-04/7:02 AM
nice. about how one almost falls down to the depths of no return, but turning back just in time. inspirational. good use of light-imagery.




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