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A Piñon Planter (Free verse) by Dovina

With chagrin, the raven flies over land of enchanted scrub. To higher ground he soars where ruby sun glistens on purple rounded hills below rugged piney mountains that looked to men of old like the shed Savior’s blood. To seven thousand feet he climbs upward, thin air, Santa Fe. Planting pine nuts lower is for the average crowd of birds. Oh, he feels it starting deep in nut-filled bowel the birth of a piñon tree planted on higher ground.

nentwined 27-Aug-04/2:51 PM
cute. odd. definitely a difficult subject matter to try to make someone take seriously. Delving into the bowels so explicity does not do it for me, I think. Bits here and there don't cohere for me.




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