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My days work (Free verse) by lucky_cmc

A days work has just been completed And what do I have to show it my aching feet, my sore back, and my sore hands. My days work has been complete. I finish practicing and i clean my room, Hey, I even looked over music that I probably can't play But I feel complete with a very good tired. My sleepy eyes and my hurt head. I've finished what I had to do. I finish my goal for today, Maybe tomorrow will be easier. But will see cause tomorrow is another day.

god'swife 24-Aug-02/1:16 AM
permit me to say this is barely articulate, if you want to get anywhere close to poetry. You're going to have to pay the big bucks. Cause after writing this you'll be lucky if they'll even allow you to read it. 0




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