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Punk Rock Christmas (Free verse) by unknown^user

Do you believe in magic? because I believe in everyone And everyone is here but the words won’t make sentences until I'm done. Just leave your worries at the door I'll just wait here And take your fucking shoes off too because I won't look you in the eyes until you do. We all live in houses in a joking kind of way I'm at home everyday. We'll sit on the porch in silence in colorful aluminum lawn chairs and watch the kids grow. Do you believe in karma? because I believe in you whatever it is you do. And I'm no fucking raver but let's talk about nothing and watch ourselves grow.

unknown^user 10-Aug-04/8:44 AM
Well put.
The faceless anonymity of the Internet, and this community specifically, provide us with the opportunity for receiving honest, unbiased, and sometimes harsh constructive criticism. I consider this a blessing and is why I come back. I would ask that comments such as the previous not be posted publicly so as not to discourage the more shy who might otherwise have something to add, but hesitate for fear of reprisal from users whom they would criticize. If you feel a need to vent, do so through poetry, that's what it's there for.




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