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Punk Rock Christmas (Free verse) by unknown^user

Do you believe in magic? because I believe in everyone And everyone is here but the words won’t make sentences until I'm done. Just leave your worries at the door I'll just wait here And take your fucking shoes off too because I won't look you in the eyes until you do. We all live in houses in a joking kind of way I'm at home everyday. We'll sit on the porch in silence in colorful aluminum lawn chairs and watch the kids grow. Do you believe in karma? because I believe in you whatever it is you do. And I'm no fucking raver but let's talk about nothing and watch ourselves grow.

massangel62 9-Aug-04/11:35 PM
like you think your poem is the best? there are a lot of poems in here that people write that are way better than yours or mine put together. i just write cause i like to, it may not make sense to you but it makes sense to me and thats all that matters. i never said that i'm a real poet or that mine are any good, but your not any better. look at the language you use in your writing. your not even worth voting on.




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