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DIDN'T I SAY (Free verse) by massangel62

didn't I say I loved you didn't I say I cared didn't I say forever I'd be waiting for you right here you didn't take me seriously you thought it was a lie how can I prove to you that my love will never die just open up your heart open your eyes and you will see that everything I said to you I meant it, seriously.

cat 6-Aug-04/12:24 PM
Massangel,

I don't know what to say about this, your poems remind me of another time, not a bad time, but another time.

I think people aren't getting you and are judging your work by a different kind of perspective, I get what you are doing and I appreciate it.

Is this about you getting published or about you sharing your experiences, because if it's the latter, it's nice work, it's not always about being modern and technical, sometimes it is just about sharing, and that can be nice :)

I hope I didn't sound patronizing, I'm sincere.

Cat




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