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Solid Understanding (Free verse) by Dovina

My words splatter like grease the simplest puzzle eludes I mimic old sayings none of it true. At such an intimate moment please don’t cast your eyes or change expression I fear if you do it’s immediately lost.

Dovina 6-Aug-04/10:49 AM
The second verse seems to have everyone vexed. Rewrite in progress.




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