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Solid Understanding
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Free verse
) by
Dovina
My words splatter like grease the simplest puzzle eludes I mimic old sayings none of it true. At such an intimate moment please donât cast your eyes or change expression I fear if you do itâs immediately lost.
Dovina
6-Aug-04/10:48 AM
1) âsimplestâ yes, thanks.
3) Could change to ânone of it sounds true,â
4) The fear is mine, not his, and I should make that clear. Thanks.
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