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Sleep (Free verse) by Shade_dreamer

in the deep blue sea of sleep rhythm breath drawn in sighs slow release sit in awe watch the rise and fall breath drawn in sighs slow release perched in silence amazed by it all emotions stirs deep within breath drawn in sighs slow release venus' path never falters breath drawn in sighs slow release rhythm

TrashCat 6-Aug-04/8:03 AM
Ummm... No... There is a definite rythm to this poem.

(There's a couple of errors ;), but definitely rythm :P)




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