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Reflected, Dreamed (Free verse) by Frass

Rent, spurned spent, turned freshly cut and newly burned a shattering clack emitted, screamed echoes alone reflected, dreamed... refraction back enfolded, preened a merging moan from deep is gleaned harmonic swell is upward beamed a fragile life is held between.

==Doylum 23-Aug-02/7:19 PM
thats what counts? if you don't know what its about whats the point? Oh lovely use of words, sorry i don't get you but it was rather well argued wasn't it chaps?
Yelp. What was that, oh i think it was a little puppy. Frass i think your super. 7/10




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