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Solid Understanding
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Free verse
) by
Dovina
My words splatter like grease the simplest puzzle eludes I mimic old sayings none of it true. At such an intimate moment please donât cast your eyes or change expression I fear if you do itâs immediately lost.
richa
6-Aug-04/6:34 AM
1) 'simplest'
2) mimic and parrot mean the same thing
3) Not sure the second verse follows on so well from 'non of it true'
4) If someone changes expression it is immediately lost, that is a truism not a fear.
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