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My purple headed womb ferret (Free verse) by ==Doylum

I hide him away so no one can say I'm a dirty prevert But sometimes at night I get him out And pet him and hug him till day But then he gets sore He can't take no more and has to be wrapped up quite tight If i had two I'd give one to you Oh sod it your gitting one anyway

god'swife 23-Aug-02/6:32 PM
It's hard for me to rank this... It's clever and not at all pretentious, which on this sight are rare commodities. If I had 2 I'd give one to you, is a gem of a rhymn, I don't get the last line though. Is your girlie getting one because she's turning into something undesirable, or because she' a transexual? In the opoem I mean. 7




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