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Marina (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Early morning fog filters through tall masts waiting brushing tight furled sheets

Dan garcia-Black 5-Aug-04/10:42 AM
No, not sober. I have just stopped drinking alcoholic beverages forever, for the third time in twenty years. As for enjambment, Haiku is so rigid that it begs for it in order to make any sense.




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