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Marina (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Early morning fog filters through tall masts waiting brushing tight furled sheets

Dan garcia-Black 4-Aug-04/11:54 PM
i think the masts are waiting and the fog is brushing. "Tall, waiting masts?" or is the fog waiting and brushing? Great images.




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