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Marina (Haiku) by INTRANSIT

Early morning fog filters through tall masts waiting brushing tight furled sheets

Dovina 4-Aug-04/5:25 PM
Sailboat waiting to sail or sailing though foggy. Like it.

Try "Peace that Passes Understanding" again and see if my explanation makes sense. I'd like to know.

Very little action on Poemranker today. I mean by users who don't call themselves "not Dovina."




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