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Life On Earth (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom

Life (Freeform) by The Unknown Poet Born without choice, We are thrust into life, Struggling to stay alive, Knowing that we must die, Searching for a God, Who can never be found, Our souls cry out for deliverance, For a way to escape, The terrible realization, That there is no way out!

cat 2-Aug-04/11:33 PM
i thought this was cool, who gave this a one, that's total bs, yeah some people hate rhymes, but this had some substance and connection to the every day person who feels trapped...i hoped i spelled rhyme right.




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