poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Cold Ones by gayguy2005.

Dovina1 Aug 2004

I think it would be stronger if some lines were omitted. Try leaving these out:

Your in command,
no longer theirs,
are yours for your delights,
yours are the only ones you hear,
no complaints on how you good you are,
its like your the only one here,