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I Dream.....
(
Free verse
) by
frdup717
I dream about my hand in yours, and of your warm embrace. I dream about my lips on yours, and the smile upon your face. I dream about the love we'd share, and of your beauty and grace. The void you fill inside my soul -no one can replace.
Shuushin
29-Jul-04/6:19 PM
"and of your beauty and grace."
meter needs tweekin, maybe... :
"your beauty and your grace"
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