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The bad news is his bones are like rubber (Free verse) by Venus

“The good news is nothing is broken,” she says. When I don’t run out of meds it’s easy, you see “C - A - T” Left to my own devices, though you lost me at “C” “The bad news is his bones are like rubber,” she says, with an audible hint of condemnation.

Venus 29-Jul-04/6:11 PM
Yeah, it's clearly missing the WIIFM factor.

The condemnation is coming from the good news/bad news doctor. Why? Because the central character is clearly at fault for the bad news - that his bones are like rubber. Whose bones? Why, the water dragon's bones, of course.

Geez, it's becoming cryptic even to me now!




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