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The Annual January Thaw (Free verse) by Dovina

Arousing hope, tempting young hikers to let down their guard so he can kill them, natural selection sends the unwary out in tennis shoes to lose their senses in watery snow. Thus he reduces the optimist population, promoting survival of embittered stoics who believe he is against them.

Venus 29-Jul-04/12:21 AM
Yeah...you've captured city life...nice work




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