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The bad news is his bones are like rubber (Free verse) by Venus

“The good news is nothing is broken,” she says. When I don’t run out of meds it’s easy, you see “C - A - T” Left to my own devices, though you lost me at “C” “The bad news is his bones are like rubber,” she says, with an audible hint of condemnation.

Venus 28-Jul-04/11:24 AM
I hear you. But it's no riddle. An "afflicted" woman is hearing some news. She doesn't hear the whole message because her mind is busy trying to justify her potential guilt. Too shrouded perhaps?




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