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The bad news is his bones are like rubber (Free verse) by Venus

“The good news is nothing is broken,” she says. When I don’t run out of meds it’s easy, you see “C - A - T” Left to my own devices, though you lost me at “C” “The bad news is his bones are like rubber,” she says, with an audible hint of condemnation.

Venus 28-Jul-04/7:51 AM
Thanks. Which 2 commas?




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