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The Annual January Thaw (Free verse) by Dovina

Arousing hope, tempting young hikers to let down their guard so he can kill them, natural selection sends the unwary out in tennis shoes to lose their senses in watery snow. Thus he reduces the optimist population, promoting survival of embittered stoics who believe he is against them.

Dan garcia-Black 27-Jul-04/7:10 PM
Great last two lines! The reversal of whom is against what took me a re-read to get. Well worth it to someone who thinks a hike is walking to the corner 7-11 instead of taking the car.




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