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The American Soldier (Sonnet) by x0lovelylarnx0

A soldier goes off to war He hopes he's coming back He sits and waits for more On his way out he carries a sack Hopes he never has to see a friend die He preys to God he won't have to fire He can't sleep or lie He listens to every command from his sire Thank god for all our troops They are giving up months of their life When they could be shooting hoops Instead they signed up for a fight He gets off his boat When he saw his family he found hope

SupremeDreamer 25-Jul-04/1:48 PM
I'm betting 3rd maybe 6th grade... can't be anything higher.. or could it? If so, marm.. we are doomed, fucking doomed, and we are witnessing the Dismal Embrowning of everything we have ever treasured or held dear... if only I could face the four horse men and spare myself this.. if only I could apply for a license to commit genocide on a large scale in the name of keeping the world from falling to the Dimming.




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