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Respect on a Quiet Hillside (Free verse) by Dovina

Under stars Blanket spread At midnight On her grandparents’ grave They did it Quietly In remembrance

Dan garcia-Black 24-Jul-04/7:22 PM
Love it. How does "They paid their respects" instead of "did it" sound to you? Grandpaw was such a 'perv' (in a good way).




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