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Respect on a Quiet Hillside (Free verse) by Dovina

Under stars Blanket spread At midnight On her grandparents’ grave They did it Quietly In remembrance

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 24-Jul-04/5:13 PM
I would have preferred it if the girl's grandfather rose up out of the grave and raped her, filling her with his zombied seed. That would also leave room for a sequel. Quite good anyway.




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