Sasha24 Jul 2004

Rhymes are off, iambic pentameter is not there, and the sire.fire rhyme is forced, as are they all.

This is actually a pretty good specimen of the crap that happens when young'uns like you think they can be profound.

-blessed with a 2-


Really, I'm being hard on you because I am expressing an honest opinion, not because I'm retaliating.