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Poor Unwritten Rabbit (Free verse) by Dovina

Driving home with faint hope searching headlights will catch a bat or cloud of insects whose unwritten lives may illumine mine. Beside the road a naïve rabbit perfectly still believes he’s invisible

Dan garcia-Black 20-Jul-04/8:55 AM
BTW, I think that the lack of connective tissue between phrases, sentences and images makes for a slower read. It gives the poem time to form in my thoughts and the end is stronger for your style.




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