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Bankruptcy (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

The lion looms his panting tongue hangs deadly dri p dri p

INTRANSIT 19-Jul-04/3:05 PM
I liked the wordplay but it did seem as though I was sitting beneath a loom while the lion weaved his tongue into a throw rug.
had to kill it.




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