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Poor Unwritten Rabbit (Free verse) by Dovina

Driving home with faint hope searching headlights will catch a bat or cloud of insects whose unwritten lives may illumine mine. Beside the road a naïve rabbit perfectly still believes he’s invisible

richa 19-Jul-04/2:25 PM
Use prepositions or punctuation in the first verse, or this:-

'ee Bombling breet par facien eeepeee'

becomes this:-

'brazque gumprij ist wozzeling kumwa raosicon nebluspi
mit cucheen ij bloot.'




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