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Sacrament (Free verse) by Dovina

On the night she was betrayed She took bread and broke it And said, this is my body Broken by you. And after pouring wine She said, this is my blood Spilled for the remission Of your guilt. As often as she does this She does it In remembrance of him.

Dovina 15-Jul-04/7:34 PM
Thanks, and that would shorten it and make it more readable. I was holding to the tenor of the Bible text in order to show a relationship of pain and the way she symbolized hers with respect for His.




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