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Wind (Free verse) by Dovina

Driven against its will, The lonesome wind, Searching, despairing, Waves on the desert Waves on the sea, Surf beating uninhabited shore, Many voices in the wind, Heavy clouds, Cold as death, Promising as life.

Dan garcia-Black 13-Jul-04/11:43 AM
Is it 'voices' promising us life as the wind drives the heavy, cold, dead clouds? What are the voices saying? I may be missing a key point, I admit. I am not good with nature. If this were about a 1957 Chevy BelAir, I'd have a better grasp of the subject matter. But I like the sound of the words blowing around in this poem.




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