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A Girl’s Climax (Free verse) by Dovina

After all the dieting, Makeup, Fashion, Poise, He finally noticed.

daveslady 13-Jul-04/11:36 AM
I love the poem but isn't it sad what people put them selves through just to get noticed by others? Why can't we just be our selves and still get noticed? The one that notices you then will truely appreciate who you are compared to the one who notices you for the mask that you put on.




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