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A Girl’s Climax (Free verse) by Dovina

After all the dieting, Makeup, Fashion, Poise, He finally noticed.

Dovina 13-Jul-04/9:57 AM
Thank you for clearing up the ambiguity people have noticed in this poem and for adding a delightful ending. It explains to anyone who might have been confused by my complex wording why “A Girls’ Climax” is achieved in being noticed by a fat, gay man, and why such a man noticed her.




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