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A Girl’s Climax (Free verse) by Dovina

After all the dieting, Makeup, Fashion, Poise, He finally noticed.

Dan garcia-Black 13-Jul-04/6:24 AM
I like everything butt the end. To avoid all the ambiguity, it should read:

After all the dieting,
Makeup,
Fashion,
Poise,
He finally noticed,
He was fat and gay.




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