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Distance (Free verse) by wilco

The world is only a picture of ordinary people searching for the extraordinary. Love is only a fixture in romance novels and poems with trains. Distance is only a measure of how badly you want to see her.

Shuushin 10-Jul-04/5:29 AM
2 out of three aint bad - good stuff wilco.

Either of the last two stanza could be full blown poems with all the trimmings if you wanted.




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