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Reflected, Dreamed (Free verse) by Frass

Rent, spurned spent, turned freshly cut and newly burned a shattering clack emitted, screamed echoes alone reflected, dreamed... refraction back enfolded, preened a merging moan from deep is gleaned harmonic swell is upward beamed a fragile life is held between.

god'swife 22-Aug-02/5:28 PM
Cheers! I don't know what thiws is about but it's well done a that's what counts. Although I can never get use to sentences being turned on their behinds for sake of a rhymn. (fromdeepisgleaned,isupwardbeamed)how about deeply gleaned and upwardly beamed.




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