Replying to a comment on:
Distance
(
Free verse
) by
wilco
The world is only a picture of ordinary people searching for the extraordinary. Love is only a fixture in romance novels and poems with trains. Distance is only a measure of how badly you want to see her.
Dovina
8-Jul-04/10:08 AM
Verse 1 is a summation of the comments on Recyclet Stardust.
Verse 2 is anti-love
Verse 3 is is a measure of love, and hard to associate with verse 2
Maybe love is the cliche, and this is the answer.
Not bad.
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