edpeterson7 Jul 2004

let me be the first to say "davinguff"

sentence structure is a major, crucial element in all writing, including free verse, prose and even some grocery lists.

the worthwhile writer takes his potential audience into consideration, and tries to structure sentences in a way that makes them understandable to that audience.

I think the poem is pretty good, though it feels like a preach in parts. this is unsavory.