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Life On Earth (Free verse) by dougsoderstrom

Life (Freeform) by The Unknown Poet Born without choice, We are thrust into life, Struggling to stay alive, Knowing that we must die, Searching for a God, Who can never be found, Our souls cry out for deliverance, For a way to escape, The terrible realization, That there is no way out!

god'swife 22-Aug-02/3:15 PM
There is no way out, you are right we're all bound towards death. But that's something a 5 year old discovers. Make this work, focus on some specific experience or moment which made you feel this, and write about the experience, not the philosophy




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