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saving myself for marriage (Haiku) by Venus

teasing proud and high ripened cherry on its stem... broken starfish cry

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 22-Aug-02/3:09 PM
Don't tell them Venus! If they don't get that delightful allusion already, they don't deserve to understand.




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