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Rainbow Tears (Free verse) by talking_goldfish

Tears Drop Upon a dusted cheek, Light Falls To shine upon the rain, The spectrum of light, infesting the land Remains but a spot, 'til the moment arrives, For loss, for sorrow, for rainbows to form And now, tomorrow, can itself be borne, Try Drop Your pain forever more, Night Falls To lose you in yourself, The stars are a-shining, the angels awake And the rain's still a-falling, on the grass that's no greener, But still you must see, the rainbow exists For if not then we, will yesterday miss, Tears Drop To save you from the pain, Light Falls For the rainbow, to be seen.

talking_goldfish 22-Aug-02/2:24 PM
hey, i'm nice!! well thanx :D but ok, the comma thing.. ya, it's, a, major, prob, of, mine, i, think, i, shud've, taken, english, maybe, i, just, pause, 2, much!!




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