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Your sad goodbye (Other) by sanity

Whispers through the branches Echo as we part Clouds above forming The rain will soon start The children's laughs and screams Echo as we part Clouds above forming Darkness in my heart Your sad goodbye to me Echo as we part Clouds above forming As you now depart

edpeterson 5-Jul-04/8:29 AM
there is something catchy and appealing about this.




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