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Your sad goodbye (Other) by sanity

Whispers through the branches Echo as we part Clouds above forming The rain will soon start The children's laughs and screams Echo as we part Clouds above forming Darkness in my heart Your sad goodbye to me Echo as we part Clouds above forming As you now depart

?-Dave_Mysterious-? 4-Jul-04/2:38 PM
I like the way you use clouds as a metaphor for the human condition.




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